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SolitaryMoonlight- 12-11-2007
The Girl I Love.

The girl I love amazes me,
her heart is kind and gentle.
She brings the sunshine to my life
and her view of life is mental.

She used to love to laugh and sing,
her voice was heard for miles.
The last sweet that she has is yours and
her eyes smile when her face smiles.

She's smart and sweet and loving,
she confronts you with the truth.
Life treats her unkindly.
She's grown up despite her youth.

She's picked on and she's bullied,
school's become a living helll.
What it's doing to her privately
even I can't really tell.

I wish that she would talk to me,
tell me truly how she feels.
But she keeps it all inside herself
while her happiness it steals.

She doesn't laugh much anymore,
she's sad and she's depressed.
She won't sing and she mopes about
I know she's feeling stressed.

I wish that I could hurt them all
make them all feel sorry.
I want to make it go away
the fear, the stress, the worry.

I want her to feel good again
like the girl I used to know.
Before they turned her into
A candle without it's glow
The wind without it's blow
The tide without it's flow
A theatre without it's show.

I wish my love could be enough
I wish I hadn't let her down.
I wish that I could help her now,
let her know she's not alone.

I wish that she could blow them off
tell them to get lost.
I wish she hadn't been the one
who had to count this cost.

I want to offer my support
oh how I wish I could
She never asks for anything
but I really wish she would.

I wish she'd tell me what she needs
just give me one small clue.
I want to help her sort this out
but I don't know what to do.

I love her oh so very much
I wish I thought she knew.
How very dear she is to me
how precious she is too.

The girl I love is all the world
The stars, the moon and sun.
Although I've other children
she'll always be number one.

My first born, my first treasure
the first tiny life I bore.
The first to call me mummy,
Although I'm not mummy anymore.

I am now mum, and other things....
I dare not tell you what.
She calls me them under her breath
when her temper gets too hot.

I try to do the right things
but I make mistakes all over.
But I hope you don't mind if
I use this chance to tell her

We may not always see things
the same way as each other
But whatever she says, whatever she does
I'm always going to love her.

I know that she will read this
one day when she is older.
I hope by then that we are
still speaking to each other.

I hope she doesn't think by then
that I let her down too badly.
I'd really like her to believe
I truly love her madly.

Whatever I did that I shouldn't have, I wish I hadn't.
Whatever I didn't do that I should have, I wish I had.
I Love You Darling Daughter
And I always will.

Katie- 12-12-2007
that was beautiful.

DarkeDesire- 12-12-2007
Oh that's lovely Moon.

Really lovely.

Abandoned Faith- 12-14-2007
It makes me want to hug both of you.

I hope things improve for you both really soon. smile.gif

SolitaryMoonlight- 12-14-2007
Thanks everyone.
And Faith thanks for the offer, we could both use all the hugs we can get for this situation.
It is not fair because she is a lovely girl, kind and generous and I hate to see her being made so miserable by these nasty little otherkin/swear.gif
Thanks again.

Moon.

ComeToMe- 12-16-2007
Ahh Moon.

What a poem!
A true love poem, I think.

I hope 2008 is better for both of you. otherkin/santacold.gif

Lady C.


my lil' lynx- 03-01-2008
Thats an amazin poem
it really touched me
like ctm said i hope this year will b better 4 the both of u
xxx

Wolfbrother- 03-03-2008
...WOW... Need I say more?

Wolfbrother

UnaRosaPorTuMuerte- 03-05-2008
Your daughter is still lucky.

She has you for her mum. smile.gif

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