Hi I was just wondering if anyone had any ideas about finding a copy of the original "Black Veil - A Code of Etiquette for Vampires".
All I can find is the one that Michelle Bellanger altered and put out as version 2.
I don't want that one. I want the real one.
If anyone knows where I could find it I would be ever so grateful.
Thankyou very much.

Darke.

I'm sure I have this somewhere...

I'll try and track it down for you.

Ahh, you don't want MB's version. It's garbage.
It's been changed so much that it's hardly even relevant to Otherkin any more.

Well said Shade
I too have read Bellanger and father ted (sorry Todds) version and I have to agree it's a right load of horse manure.
Well done Darke for bringing up this subject,I have read some of the original version and it not only makes more sense, it actually works for more than just vampires.
Lets hope C.T.M can find it soon. I think it will be a valuable addition to the forum or website.

Zygo

i think my pack has it on their site dont know what version it is but its in the code of eithics part

heres the link http://www.freewebs.com/shadowcavernpack/v...odeofethics.htm

Hi wolfy..

That one is Michelle Bellanger and father Todds.
It is a very washed out version of the true one.
Thanks for the link though we will be able to compare the two now and see just how humanised Ms bellangers version is.

Zygo

Hi Wolfie, thanks so much for that. It's really interesting.

Actually Zygo, sorry, but that's not MB's.
BUT it's not my original either, which having been written many years ago, of course has no reference to public television in it anywhere.

This one appears to be half way between the two. It has some words from my version and the feel is very much the same, but it's not an exact copy.

It's nice that there are so many versions of this, as people change them and copy them out to suit themselves, their packs or personal situations. It all helps to get the message out.

In this version, this part

seems to have been specifically written to take a sly dig at MB and her obsessive love of being in the public eye, 'sharing' her true nature with the world!!!
Oh, I'm laughing so hard at the thought of her as a 'real' Vampire that I'm getting tummy ache.
I'll post up both versions, in fact, I think if I can find another copy of the one Wolfie posted up that proves it's not just the property of his pack (wouldn't want to steal original work from anyone) I'll post up all three versions here and then we can see the differences and similarities between them all.

C.T.M.

LOL I do apologise
You are right of course.
I think I might be a bit M.B. obsessed.

It would however be great to be able to compare all three.
Has anyone seen any other versions ?

Zygo