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zygopterix- 05-26-2008

The fire within twists and burns
The flame without responds and turns
Embers falling, twisting toiling
Air on fire, water boiling
Fire like knife cuts through all
Firestorm turns and deadens all
The animal now sears and speaks
Running hot my spirit seeks
Natures seed it adds and sows
From the ashes now it grows
Life and all it runs anew
Refreshed and clear like morning dew
Fire and fear, blood and bone
The animal always feeds alone.
I bring the phoenix here to you
Fires of gold and deepest blue.

Zygopterix otherkin/pheonix1a.GIF



ElvinDreams- 05-26-2008
I love your poem Zygo.
You have hidden talents. smile.gif

It reads to me like the birth of a pheonix and the renewal of life from a flame's perspective.

Elvin.

ComeToMe- 05-27-2008
This is just beautiful Zygo.
Right from your heart, and it shows. smile.gif

Cami. x

terri-vale- 05-27-2008
lovely poem zygo smile.gif

"I bring the phoenix here to you
Fires of gold and deepest blue" i love those lines smile.gif



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