hi, i love to write poetry so i thought i would add a few of mine to this page



I had a secret vampire,
His name I couldn’t spell,
But each night he came,
“For you my dame.”
Made me promise not to tell.

I had a secret vampire,
His lust I couldn’t quell,
He lay me down,
“Now don’t you frown.”
And drank from me as well.

I had a secret vampire,
He locked us in his cell,
And there we would kiss,
“Isn’t life bliss?”
My sweet Immanuel.

I had a secret vampire,
He made my heart rebel,
We would fly through the night,
“Till morning light.”
My loving fiend from he.ll.

I had a secret vampire,
I thought I knew him well,
He broke my heart.
“You stupid tart!”
And left me where I fell.


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As that is a big, huge ..
Lady C.

theres another one ...


“Ever dance with the devil by the pale moon light?” the Joker, (Batman)

Did you say yes, to his request,
To dance through out the night?
Did you take his hand, admire his footwork,
And become hypnotised by those blue eyes?
Did you notice the glisten behind his eye,
As he burnt your soul in one hand?
Did you fall for his cheeky smile,
And the lies he told,
The *Bunnies* about destiny and fate.
Did you believe him when he said those devious words,
And did you say them back?
“I love you.”

The strings were pulled from above,
Gepetto’s b.itch!
I tried to get away, tried to run,
But one kiss from those crimson lips,
And I fell back into his arms.

I said yes to his request,
To dance through out the night.
I fell for that cheeky smile,
Inside he laughed at the irony.
I was dazzled by his golden hair,
Yes, never trust the blonde with a dandy look,
And a hanky in his pocket.

This is the Faustian slip,
Give your soul for the one night of passion.

Ever dance with the devil by the pale moon light?
Ever tasted those lips and never said goodnight?



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As that is a big, huge ..
Lady C.

They're good terri. Really good.

Lady C is the one to talk to about getting around the word filters to display the words you actually used instead of the words it substitutes.
She's tough on swearing really, but for stuff like this she's usually approachable.
As a library Moderator I could have a word with her for you if you like?
Just a thought.

I'm really looking forward to hearing more of your poems.

Darkness.

I agree with Darkness terri, these are very good.

I think I liked the second one the most. I have had my own doubts about men who carry a handkerchief.

Elvin.

Both are very good poems terri, I enjoyed reading both. I hope to see more of what you have to share with us. If you ever care to read mine, well, that link I'll post in my thread on my poetry, as this is yours, and I do not wish to take away from it.

~DA~

thankyou all very much, when i find out how to use the message system then yeah ill ask lady C

Well the nosy one who sees all and misses nothing has taken care of it for you terri.
I hope it meets with your satisfaction?
If not please let me know what you want instead and I'll do that for you.

By the way.... These are really great poems.

Lady C.