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Serenity- 11-09-2008
Never cry, never scream
Believe that this is all a dream
If this thought erased the fear
Keep it darling, hold it dear
I touched your skin, so utterly cold
I prayed for you, to find a home
Within my heart blossomed pain
Fed by thought I knew were vain
I wondered why you turned away
Why you said you could not stay
Am I so hated that you fear
Just to keep my essence near
Would I corrupt your soul I ask
Could I corrupt something so black

Tainted by your misery
This pain has found its home in me
Ill never let it leave me now
Though I don’t think that I know how
To live within this world of yours
With these high windows and closed doors
Is this the price of sanity?
To lose yourself in vanity?
I ask this question of you dear
Who is the true monster here?

Though my hands are stained with blood
Ill live this life you never could
Honesty you’ve always lacked
Lying softly you twist the facts
You know I loved you
I swear that’s true!
But how can I tell, if it was you?
The one that stabbed me in the back
The one who cried “please come back!”
I didn’t turn, I walked away
For your tomorrow is my today
Please forgive me, my lovely one
Please find the ones you stand among
Tell me this I ask of thee
The true monster here was not me




Luna/Bartimaeus- 11-09-2008
Good poem I really liked it. It reminds me a lot of Twilight.

zygopterix- 11-09-2008
Very good Serenity.
Your poem makes me think of losing a lover because they did something terrible but thought to blame you for it.
I may be way off mark but this is what I take from the poem.

Good stuff

Zygo

Demetry- 11-09-2008
You are getting really good at these Ser otherkin/870.gif , why dont you post that one you wrote the other day?

ComeToMe- 11-09-2008
That's wonderful.

You're really good Serenity.
I absolutely must post some of mine. I just never seem to have the time.


Abandoned Faith- 11-10-2008
This one made me squirm while I was reading it.
I must have a guilty concience or something.

Good writing Serenity.


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