Forever

This is just something I put together on a whim. I know it is a little non-poetic. It doesn't flow very well, but I thought it had a nice tune of it's own with it.

So here it is, please feel free to comment on it.

QUOTE (Forever: by Farshief)

Forever,
Would seem such a wonderful prospect.
Supposed to be an amazing thing.

However,
Never did I ever imagine.
That one day,
I might find myself Wishing,
Hoping,
Dreaming,
Waiting.

Waiting for Forever to get here,
So I can be with with whom I am meant to be.

Waiting so patiently it seems,
Yet forever,
Hardly ever draws near.

Dreaming so wistfully it seems,
Dreaming of visions of a future so clear.

Hoping for time to speed,
Wanting it to fly like it has never flown before.

Wishing, just wishing.
That forever, would not expend forever.
On it's journey to reach me.

So while I view forever as a happy prospect,
I still find myself Wishing,
Hoping,
Dreaming,
and Waiting.

For the time when I can be whole.
Whole, in forever, with her.
When I can Wish successfully for my time with her to never end.
When I can Hope triumphantly to never be parted from her.
When I can Dream, and Dream only of my times with her.
When I can Wait, nevermore.

Always am I waiting for forever,
But I know some day it will reach me.

The day, I can be happy evermore.

~Farshief

that poem is just,, its otherkin/applaud.gif

utterly beautiful

That is quite something Farshief.

well done.

Wild

Wow......Its so sweet......I like the way it flows on its own rhythm.

Show it to nishyla?

Thanks for the comments guys, and no I haven't shown it to Nishyla yet. I wrote it just after she went to bed last night. Right before I went to bed for that matter.

So I am waiting for her to get on so I can show her.

Hope she likes it, otherkin/687.gif

~Farshief

Hello Farshief.

I enjoyed your poem very much. It is unusual in it's rhythm, but somehow that makes it better not worse. It gives it distinction, and as Luna says it has a flow of it's own that gives it a unique identity.

aww...It's really supper sweet. I like it. otherkin/687.gif

Always doing things to be sweet...you keep it up and the whole world will know...Oops to late...<3

Gah, you have unveiled me. *melts*

No, but really. I'm really glad you like it otherkin/687.gif

~Farshief

You should write more in that format Farshief.
I enjoyed reading it.

Zygo

I would, goddess knows I love writing in it, but my can't write without really strong inspiration.

I'm really glad everyone enjoyed it,
~Farshief

That was really good.

I liked the unusual rhythm, it made it seem less repetitive than a lot of the poems I've read.