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Velvet Darkness- 11-23-2008
Back from the 'dark place'
no light's ever seen.
Back to the world
from a Midsummer Dream.

Imagine a nightmare
and picture me there.
Learning life's hardest lesson,
that life's never fair.

Torn from my loved ones,
betrayed by my friends.
Condemned to existence
where grief never ends.

The Darkness that beckoned
and captured my heart.
It lured me away
and kept us apart.

I vanquished my demons,
and from Darkness I came.
stalking your echo
calling my name.

A hard journey homeward,
a long winding road.
My anger my burden
more weighty than gold.

I offer no answers,
I'll give no replies.
Believe I speak truth,
or believe it is lies.

Read what I post
and take your own view.

My name is Velvet
and I'm pleased to meet you.


Abandoned Faith- 11-24-2008
Wow.

Whether real or imagined, that doesn't sound good.

Welcome back. smile.gif

Faith otherkin/pegasus.GIF

When_Im_Gone- 11-24-2008
So dark and wow. I feel i have traveled a road of darkness but not like this. yous is lonelyer than mine... and a little more scarier... i shiver... otherkin/8).gif

Silver

Velvet Darkness- 11-25-2008
Thankyou for your comments. I really appreciate them. smile.gif

It has only been a short while since my life was that dark, and things are beginning to get better again for me, but the memory of it will stay with me forever I think.

Captive Wild- 11-26-2008
That is a beautifully dark poem Velvet. It is not a place I would want to go and my deepest respect goes to you for managing to find your way back.

Wild otherkin/animal-smiley-038.gif

SolitaryMoonlight- 11-26-2008
I'm glad to hear that things are getting better for you.
If you ever need someone to talk to or there is anything I can ever help you with PM me anytime.
I really mean that. Anytime. smile.gif

Moon.

Serenity- 11-27-2008
Thats was so real, It was like I could actually feel the emotion in every word, hauntingly beautiful I say otherkin/870.gif Wow!

WhisperInTheDark- 11-27-2008
This is very disturbing.
The anger, confusion and emotional instability alluded to here makes for a piece that is very intense.

I appreciate the symbolism, and fervently hope that symbolism is all that it is.




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