Don’t dream its over
Don’t dream its over. cause I really thought you were the one. With your sweet face and your blue eyes.i could look into them forever but I guess I was wrong.and yet they were right.so just let me stay here and think it all out tonight.yet as you leave. I try to reach out. In the minst of all the tears. Your gone.so don’t dream its over.cause I really thought you would care. Casue that one night a long ago. When everything felt so right.i wasn;t really aware. Of the time or the place.all I cared for was you.but as I sit here and cry think of the lies and all of the times. I relize now the one thing we didn’t have was trust. so don’t dream its over.cause I don’t think my heart can break anymore. The tears are all gone. The lies have all come undone for the whole world to see. So don’t dream its over I really hope you have a good life. And all of the pain you caused comes back to you some night. so don’t dream its over as I lay here and try to sleep. As I try to forget all of the regret. Of being blinded by love. O god what have I done. with my hand on my chest. So lets dream its over so I can just forget, it might hurt for now but in time I will forget.
That's very good Jack T.
It is sad and moving, and makes you feel for the person telling the story of their lost love.
I like this kind of writing, but then I am an old romantic.
Isn't it awful though that the romances that didn't work out make better poems and orations than the happy endings?
Yes I'd agree with that Lady C. It's sad but true that unhappy endings pull more heart strings than happy ones.
I love your poem Jack T.
Was this your first or have you more?