There’s beauty in the sun they say
That light will always guide the way
But hasn’t anyone ever seen?
The light within each hidden dream?
The beauty of the glowing moon
That always leaves far too soon
The beauty of a prowling cat
Or wolves running with their pack
The beauty of the broken things
The beauty of folded wings
The beauty hidden in a tear
The beauty that displaces fear
Are these things not wonderful too?
Though their sun might be your moon
Though in darkness they might dwell
The dark has beautiful things as well
The sun is brighter than the moon
And though the moon fades too soon
It has the pleasure of having known
A beauty that is all its own

Thats the first none morbid poem Ive heard from you Ser and I must say its awesome!

Morbid? I thought my poems were just a tad sad.

As that poem above says though even in the darker side of things there is beauty. Just cause a poem is sad doesn't mean it's not excellent

Good job, I liked it.
~Farshief

Its beautiful. You are truly talented.

From the heart is definitely the way to go Serenity

Zygo

That is a lovely poem.

I enjoy the thought that another sees the beauty in broken things, especially being a broken thing myself.

thanks guys and i beleive everything has some form of beauty velvet even those that are broken